Dog Collars and Rabbit Corpses: Finished

Tuesday, January 17, 2006

Phew assignment finished just need to check spelling,grammar and oh yes check it makes sense, oh well two out of three aint bad!

At 12:43 pm, 1 i z said...: Stuart has made an excellent effort with his latest piece of work. Generally he has improved greatly in forming good, concise conclusions and learning that it's almost always a good idea to put a comma after the word however.

His increased use of commas generally and even the odd judicial use of a semi-colon is most encouraging. If he can just manage to learn the difference between 'there' and 'their' and fully master when the word church should be capitalised and when not, my work will be complete.

Overall Stuart is an exceptional student, with interesting and well formed ideas that he expresses in a highly readable fashion. My prediction is that he could go far...but he shouldn't unless he wants his legs broken as I insist my favourite Buddy stays in the Greater Manchester area...

The Proof Reader